Good video, but you need to proof read your captions. About 4:30 there's a bit about Nimer saying he had resigned, when I think it should be had NOT resigned, and at 22:40 you've misspelled confidence. There might be others, but they were the main ones that jumped out at me. Also the bit about Olly and Mick getting the sack, unless you know the story you won't know who Tracy Leaburn is, or why there's a picture of her. Might be better to do:
During the coup, Southall sacked Club Journalist Olly Groome show picture of Olly with the cup Safety Officer Mick Everett
show picture of Mick (if you haven't got one, there's one on the bitesize thread) and attempted to sack Player Liaison Officer Tracy Leaburn
show picture of Tracy
You should probably also mention on the Friday section that Olly and Mick were reinstated before the final bit about the games being called off.
Good video, but you need to proof read your captions. About 4:30 there's a bit about Nimer saying he had resigned, when I think it should be had NOT resigned, and at 22:40 you've misspelled confidence. There might be others, but they were the main ones that jumped out at me. Also the bit about Olly and Mick getting the sack, unless you know the story you won't know who Tracy Leaburn is, or why there's a picture of her. Might be better to do:
During the coup, Southall sacked Club Journalist Olly Groome show picture of Olly with the cup Safety Officer Mick Everett
show picture of Mick (if you haven't got one, there's one on the bitesize thread) and attempted to sack Player Liaison Officer Tracy Leaburn
show picture of Tracy
You should probably also mention on the Friday section that Olly and Mick were reinstated before the final bit about the games being called off.
Good point! Note to self don't edit late in the evening lol
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show picture of Olly with the cup
Safety Officer Mick Everett
show picture of Mick (if you haven't got one, there's one on the bitesize thread)
and attempted to sack Player Liaison Officer Tracy Leaburn
show picture of Tracy
You should probably also mention on the Friday section that Olly and Mick were reinstated before the final bit about the games being called off.